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Your story brought tears to my eyes! What a wonderful way to express grief and hope of heaven for the believer. Your sentences were well formed and dialogue felt natural. I would like to hear more about Georgia and Georgette.
This was so beautiful and mesmerizing. I loved it!
I thought it was touching and had so many wonderful moments filled with the promise of eternal life through our faith.

The rainbow at the end was so inspiring and moving. It made my heart sing and smile at once!

I pray this gets notice from the moved me completely.

Thank you!

God bless~
Very well written.

Oh, that we might have that love for others.
This moved me to tears. When I see a rainbow I'm reminded of His promise never to leave us or forsake us. What joy a rainbow brings, even on sad days. A lovely, lovely story.
Thank each of you for the encouragement. While this piece will most likely not place, I've already won one for the Spirit if it spoke to your heart. It was written with you in mind. May He use it however you need it Beloved!!! Be blessed and highly favored!! Thanks again for your support. I appreciate it more than you know

Love Opal
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