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Topic: Lock and Key (08/21/14)
Hajiizi was now the world’s deadliest terrorist organization that was based out of Syria. They had broken into the Center for Disease Control in Atlanta, Georgia, and stole the worst bio-chemical substance known to man called Zexod-II.

Dr. Zilea Mokhadzi was a well respected Bio-Chemical MD., who worked at the CDC as a research specialist in field of biological chemical warfare.

Mokhadzi was one of the best doctors in the world when it came to treating those exposed to deadly toxins.

Mokhadzi was actually working in secret with 3 other doctors that were a part of a group of scientists and biologists that belonged to the terrorist group, Hajiizi.

Mokhadzi had been promoted to Associate Director in the department of Bio-chemical Disease Control.

Mokhadzi had worked secretly in an underground lab in Syria for 3 years developing and perfecting Zexod-II.

At the request of the CDC, Mokhadzi sent them 2 gallons of the deadly substance, 18 months prior to being hired by the CDC.

Zexod-II was a ruthless substance with death as its trademark. Exposure through drinking water tainted with Zexod-II substance, usually killed its victim within 15 minutes. This was a gruesome death unlike anything ever seen.

The substance was transmitted to the public through community water systems throughout America.

Dr. Mokhadzi met with the group of terrorist given the task of contaminating water systems.

It took only 1 quart to completely contaminate the water system of a large city.

“I will wait until all others in my department leave to go home. I will tell my boss I will be working late trying to find a chemical substance to neutralize Zexod-II.

Those silly scientists here have no clue that I invented Zexod-II in the first place.”

After Mokhadzi had addressed the small group of terrorist, they met Mokhadzi in a hidden alley across from the CDC.

They soon entered the CDC, and took 3 large containers of the deadly virus that were held under lock and key.

Two days after the vats were stolen, Mokhadzi mysteriously disappeared. He started supervising the terrorists as they attacked 4 water systems for the cities of Chicago, St. Louis, Dallas, and Los Angeles.

Within 18 hours, 16 million people had succumbed to the horrific substance.

Dr. Henry Rice was a 30 year Marine veteran and an elite MD. In the past, Rice had discovered ways to counteract bio-chemical warfare.

Dr. Rice was a born again Christian, and held true to his faith over the years.

“Gentlemen, we are facing the worst bio-chemical substances known to mankind. Our backs are up against the wall, and prayer is our best chance to crack this nut.”

A somber, but determined man, Dr. Rice and the top bio-chemical warfare specialists went to work behind closed doors.

Dr. Rice led the men in prayer. So far, the 4 cities were the only ones whose water systems had been compromised.

However, the death toll kept rising in the cities that had been attacked. The overall death total was now near 21 million.

“Gentlemen I have water samples from each city under siege. It is most important that you handle the water with extreme care.

I see that each of you has on the proper safety gear I’ve requested you to wear. Do not take any of it off until you have gone through the detailed decontamination process.”

The doctors spent several hours in prayer and research for something to render Zexod II to harmless status.

“Men, I keep thinking about mosquito larvae each time we pray. I know this is very odd, but I think the Lord is telling me that this is the key to unlock this evil siege.” spoke Dr. Rice.

“I want 2 of you to drive to the marsh area near Dalton, and gather as much mosquito larvae as possible and return ASAP.”

The 2 doctors found several marshy areas that were teaming with mosquito larvae, and quickly filled up several 5 gallon buckets.

The doctors had a very brief laugh over the thought of one of mankind’s worst pests might be the salvation of millions in the USA.

“God used a blood sucking pest to save millions of his children. This shows us that he can turn bad to good if we trust him completely.” As Rice spoke, tears of joy welled up in his eyes.

Soon the substance was rendered harmless in all effected cities and the terrorists were brought to justice.
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C D Swanson 
08/29/14
Wow - that was an excellent story that kept me on the edge of my seat. Well done!

This is scary in that it is not outside the boundaries of reality in terms of what's going on today in our world!! Good imagination, and on target. Well done.

God bless~
Julene Celander
08/29/14
Very well written and how it could become very true!

Just shows us God is the only answer in perilous times.

Love your faith and your stories. Everyone who doesn't know God should be very, very afraid.
Larry Whittington
09/02/14
I really like three components of your story.

First was the praying.

Second was the use of something God had made and

Third following the lead of the Holy Spirit within the lead doctor.

When we have ideas and thoughts in our head that first are good and not in conflict with any Bible teaching, these thoughts may be the exact expression of the Holy spirit communicating to the person in which he dwells.

Good writing. creative mystery or science fiction.