The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/14
There are lot of great thoughts in your article. You did an excellent job. My one bit of advice is to spend a little more time editing....but that is something I struggle with too.
These are good thoughts though rarely carried out because of the current dating practices seen in the USA.

It is not only the man who should be waiting but the woman also. She can't be the right woman for the wrong man.

This was well written and easy to follow.
This is an interesting devotion. I liked how how shared some of your opinions to show your message. For me personally, the sudden change of voice from third person to second person was a bit jolting and sometimes to some people that switch can come off as too preachy. Overall, you did a nice job of writing on topic. The ending was a strong message that brought the devotion full circle. You seem to have a passion for sharing God's word, I'd urge you to consider submitting some devotions to FW daily devotions.
08/18/14
Beautifully written and gentle on the soul.

Great job.

God bless~