The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/14
Good message!

God bless~
08/11/14
Some very good analogizes. Good job on that.

It was more of a bible study workpiece.

I would suggest reading the judges list of criteria on which they use to base their decision.

Also, a lot of little grammar errors. Re-read your story over and over. Ask yourself if you are meeting the judges suggestions for the whole piece.

Keep writing. Hope this helps.