The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
Two things....
It should be...I was sitting on the couch (not setting)....I put pen to paper (not pin to paper)
01/17/05
Jesus is so patient with us. He is that friend that sticks closer than a brother.
True words and well spoken...Just a thought..
You can use spell check on your PC it will help with spelling errors we sometimes miss.
Yeshua Bless
Norma
Your work beautifully captured the struggle that we sometimes go through when God is trying to reach us! Never give up! Do try to use grammar/spellcheck -- it would be a shame for good work to be passed over because of correctable errors. God bless you, Cheri
01/19/05
Very nice entry! I love the way that you portrayed your English teachers standing with hands on hips.How many times are we defeated because of fear and feelings of inferiority?
01/20/05
How often have I missed God's great blessings because I failed to yield to his will for my life! We can be so dense sometimes, can't we? I'm so glad you did yield, and I pray that you are blessed because of it. I know I was - thanks!
01/21/05
great description of how we fight spiritual battles
Keep on writing no matter how many people stand with hands on their hips. He that began a good work in you shall also accomplish it. God bless you.
01/27/05
I was left desiring to read about Julie....I bet she was a BEAUTIFUL swan....just like the beautiful writing hidden away in you until God's perfect timing let it fly...
Blessings,
DeAnna