The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/14
Well done!

God bless~
A very nice poem. I was just reading about this today in my Bible in 1 Corinthians 7:7 that says, "But each man has his own gift from God; one has this gift, another has that."

This is a nice read. I hope you place with this one. Well done.
You relate a good message and I like how you used the fourth line differently each time.

I like poems that have a steady rhythm. This, though, takes a lot of time and work.

Continue writing, seeking which format works best for you.
08/14/14
Well-woven message!

Wing His Words