The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/14
Loved it!

Well done.

God bless~
07/27/14
This is a nice little object lesson. Well done.
07/27/14
Great take on the topic. Very enjoyable!
I liked Pepe and Penny. They will live on.

Your characters came to life. I could hear their voices as I read your story.

Your Bible reference clearly put Penny back on the right track. Maybe we all need to think of that in our relationship with/to others.
07/30/14
“I like it. I need you and you need me. We complement each other because that is the way the Good Lord made us.”

Isn't that just how God intended?! I love the message!
07/30/14
My compliments you on your complement lesson!
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