The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this touched my heart. It was such a tender story that was well written. Poignant and purposeful.

Nicely done.

God bless~
I thoroughly enjoyed this well written story. I can't imagine why you are in the Beginner's level; your writing is far above that. I look forward to reading future submissions.
This is a well put together "outline" for a short story.

I liked it.

There is "give and take" in this story that drew me into it.

In one respect, no one was the winner but in life sometimes that is the way it is.

If you like this kind of story and writing, keep at it and let the Holy Spirit lead in your life day by day.
I hope to see this in 1st Place!

Wing His Words
I guess I know a winner when I see it!

Wing His Words
Good job! The descriptions are great and it's a really sweet story. Congrats on first place!
What a great story and an original use of the topic. No wonder you placed in EC. You certainly won't in level 2 for long. Congratulations!
Congratulations on EC for a wonderful poem!
Oops! That would be short story!
Beautiful story. Congrats on your placement! Great job!
Congratulations! What a beautiful tale.
Wow, what a beautiful story. You did a marvelous job in showing the gorgeous setting and bringing the MC to life. I'm super impressed that your first challenge entry ranked so high overall. It's not an easy task to accomplish, but this piece certainly deserved it. I can't wait to read more of your work.
I would love a novel about Grampa! What a picturesque and emotionally gripping read!

Congratulations on your winning placements with this endearing piece. You have what it takes to put pen to paper and draw people in, getting them interested in what you have to say. Good job.
Oh my - crocodile tears threatening to spill over.

Superbly crafted story. Congratulations on your win!
Congratulations on your EC!What a beautiful story! You included vivid details to bring the story to life and the conflict drew me in.
Wow, I felt emotions as I read. My mind saw the pictures you painted in words. I was with you as I read. And not being a business woman myself I identified with you. Good job.
Congratulations on a worthy win!
Yay for you-congratulations!
Very moving and beautiful story which drew me right in. Congratulations!
What a blessing it was to read this piece! Often I go back and peruse the winning entries I'd previously missed. And you made my visit so well worth the effort. Kudo's on the EC. Keep writing these entries that puts us right there in the story. I felt like I was your MC, living it along with. Well done!
PS Why are you in this lower level?
This is so wonderful! And congrats!
Loved this piece. Congrats on your win!