The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/14
Indelible reminders throughout this piece.
Well done.

God bless~
A nicely written poem that reminds us that we must be faithful till the end. Choosing to obey God is not a one time act. We choose to do so each day because the Holy Spirit within us urges us to obey the teachings of the bible.

Well written. Keep on writing for the glory of God.
This is a lovely piece. Instantly I felt drawn in and the rhythm and rhymes coaxed me into a sense of peace.

Out of the eight judging criteria, I think your weakest was writing on topic. Without that one line of the Bible being a love letter (which a love letter could be done in many ways other than pen and paper), I struggled with seeing the topic. Ideally one would be able to guess it if not known.

You did a fine job with the other criteria though. Your poem flowed smoothly, and I could feel your passion in each verse. There's nothing more poetic and perfect than Jesus' love, and I felt that beautiful message in every line. You also handled the ending well. You left me smiling and nodding my head. Keep writing and God bless.