The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/14
Great job with the topic!

Excellent message.
Thank you.

God bless~
I enjoyed reading this article very much! Nice job for sure!
It is good to be thankful for a person God has given us.

Your words can be an encouragement to others who stick together and find the peace (good) in each other's company.

Keep working as you express yourself in poetry.
This is a touching piece. I think the repetition of I'm good now was perfect. It paced the poem and filled me with a sense of peace as I read it. Tiny red ink, ups and downs don't need apostrophes, just add the s to show the plural. The time you might us an apostrophe would be like:The up's high is way high. The high belongs to the up. That was tiny though and didn't interfere with your wonderful words that were arranged like a beautiful piece of art.
06/03/14
I wasn't feeling well today, but "I'm good now" that I've read your piece. :-) Keep up the great work bringing glory to God.