The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/14
What a touching story, you had my heart beginning to the very end. How blessed to have such a friend, and vice versa!

God bless~
This is a sweet poem. How true many of the lines are. It felt like you were missing some minor words in the last line of the first two verses. You made a great point about Jesus being our best friend. You did a nice job with this.
You worked hard on the rhyming words. You also did well getting the line length.

both of these are hard and take time.

The story you did tell
quite well.
06/04/14
Your narrative came through very well in this poem. Just one or two missing words that did not take away from the meaning. Your rhyming was really very good.