The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/14
Well done and well said.
Good scriptures of choice for the topic at hand.

God bless~
Good advice for all of us.

I read poems best when there is a "sing-songy" pattern in the words. This make use of the accent and unaccented syllables of the words. This pattern takes a lot of work in word choice.

I really like the thought you put into this piece and what it is that you want your readers to get from it.
I rarely write poems, and tend not to read them. Your poem is interesting with a good message. I know it takes a lot of talent to write good poetry, and you seem to have a gift for it!
05/21/14
A very direct and concise message. Good job with the scripture references. Keep up the good work.