The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/05
I enjoyed your poem. Verse two rang especially true in my ears and reading it from "God;s point of view" was effective.
02/11/05
I like it! Verse two and the last verse are my favorites!

God bless,
Very, very good poem. I love the image of His eyes of fire searching our souls. Will we be found loving truth or a lie? Will our hearts be equipped to fly? Great job!
02/28/05
Very impactful words, woven with the frim foundation of Biblical truth. Great job!! Nancy