The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/14
Some very good thoughts here and lots to chew on. The only suggestion I would make is make sure you leave space between the paragraphs. It will make it easier for folks to read.
04/18/14
Great messages woven throughout this devotional. Nicely done.

God bless~
04/21/14
This article provided a lot of thought-provoking questions, and is an effective tool for self evaluation.

I would suggest breaking up your entry into manageable paragraphs so your readers can have a better reading experience. The three points you presented would make nice paragraphs. Also, incorporate the scriptures in the body of the article so readers will be able to differentiate as well as make a connection between your thoughts and the facts from the Bible, while reading.

You have presented an interesting devotional piece with a profound ending. Keep writing.
A very good article on truth.

I am thankful that we are given the Holy Spirit to live within us when we are baptized.
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