The Official Writing Challenge
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It wasn't very difficult figuring our who wrote this one. Thank you for another great adventure. Keep up the good work.
I love your stories. They're hearty and always moving. Great job with this weeks topic, and a beautiful ending!

I look foward to your next entry.

God bless~
You did a fantastic job highlighting one of the good sides of the internet. I was drawn in by your title and your story didn't disappoint. Wonderful. Keep writing!
Great story of a forever friendship. Friendships honed out of hardships last a lifetime. Thanks for sharing.
All emotions were on board as I read this article; fright, fear, sadness, joy... It is rather engaging.

I would recommend that when writing dialogues, you put each voice in a different paragraph/line. Doing this makes it easier to identify who is speaking. Also, the ending seemed a bit crammed. Some of the events in the beginning could be altered/condensed so more words could be used to develop the ending a little more.

However, I enjoyed the twist in the end. I would have never guessed it. I also like the use of the topic. Keep writing.
This was a good use of a historical situation to tell a story. Actually, it could have happened.

This was well written using the facts of the time. Good information used to set the stage.

Well done.
Congtrats on your HC! You are getting better with your storytelling every week. Very proud of you!
Congrats! God bless~