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Clever and unique way of approaching the topic. This is a completely fresh take on the subject for this week.

Nicely done!

God bless~
I loved the journal format of this story. It made it easier to see the progression of time. Nice take on the topic. I wished there was more room so I could know more about Jamie. Thanks for sharing!
I am not sure what I am to feel at the end of reading this piece. Do I assume all is well or that medication and Dr. visits will continue?

Otherwise I like the diary approach to telling a story.
Wonderful insight into how the mind of how Major Depressive Disorder devours its victims. Your journal entry approach is fresh and makes the MC come across as real, human, and in need of help. I especially like how at the end the MC found her smile again. Great job. Keep writing.
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