The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/14
Simply "beautiful."

Excellent work!

God bless~
A creative way to tackle the topic in poetic form. I liked how you progressed from just getting our feet wet, all the way to the very end.

Good job! The ending verse was my favorite. Thanks for sharing!
An interesting way to show the stages of life.

Well written and easy to follow.

It is always good to make Jesus our Lord early in life so we follow his leading. We can start, though, at any time by obeying what Peter commanded us to do so we are given the gift of the Holy Spirit to guide us.