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So beautiful!

Touching and so filled with peace...I loved this.

To be His bride, it doesn't get any better than that!

God bless~
What a neat take on the topic. I wasn't sure where you were heading with the interrupted wedding, but by the time I got it, I really enjoyed it.

Very creative twist. I love the fact that the Bride was able to take that stand and realize that she didn't have to be a slave to her father's lifestyle. What a great reminder for us all.

Good job! You had one typo--bloodcurling should be bloodcurdling, as it "curdles" the blood, not curls it. ;)

Thanks for sharing this lovely piece!
An interesting portrayal of a future Bible event.

This should encourage us to live a life ready for it.

In a time sequence it appears that the judgement will come just before the wedding.

Good writing to remind us of this event.
I too was not sure how this article was heading, but I soon realized that it was a scriptural piece and that it was a lesson for us readers to be prepared for eternity. Good job.