The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/14
Fantastic story! I loved it, as I love happy endings. This was so good.

God bless~
02/06/14
"One day." What a perfect answer to the most important question.

I, too, enjoyed the happy ending.
02/07/14
This is a beautiful entry. I enjoyed it thoroughly. The MC's grandfather really left him a treasure. Keep writing.

PS: The judges will have a hard time this week!
A very well written life story.

Teaches many lessons in life and for life's choices.

Good writing.

Keep your eye in his word.
02/09/14
What a lovely treasure of a story. Your grandfather would be proud to know that you kept the treasures between the bookends and the greatest one of all - the Bible. I love your wonderful telling of it.
02/13/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
02/14/14
I'm thrilled! Thanks for all the encouragement. I need to explain that the story is fiction. There is "reality" in that the setting is real, this is the Chinese "Year of the Horse."