The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/14
Felt your heart and love for the Lord in this poem.

GOd bless~
God's Holy Spirit calls us.

When we obey his call, hope arises, as we are baptized for the forgiveness of our sin which had separated us.

Continue with poems.

Some writers like the same number of lines in each verse. Others use the length of the lines (or thought) to determine where the break should be.
Loved your title. It really captured what this poem was about. I loved your opening verse and the first few lines especially. Good rhyming scheme.

Thank you for sharing!
02/11/14
Jesus is our great leader, guiding us home. Thank you for your entry. God bless you and keep on writing.
02/12/14
I could see this being read aloud at a Christian poetry slam somewhere. How about forming one in your church? Good message you share - keep writing.