The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow- This was so amazingly moving and powerful. It hooked me immediately and I felt the struggles and pain of the MC. Fantastic ending, it held a note of authenticity.

Great job with this piece!

God bless~
Great testimony! Hope you get opportunities to share your story with others who will benefit from the powerful message of deliverance. Consider posting it as a free reprint - it will more than likely get published somewhere.
There is so much great material here in your piece. I hope you'll write this same story many more times, revising it as you continue to grow as a writer. You have a God-given ability to write, and you have a good testimony to give. Good job. Keep on submitting!
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