The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/14
Great warnings and a timely reminder to be diligent and aware of all the false prophets and preachers in this world.

God bless~
02/02/14
Your admonitions are good and right. You might however help folks relate each truth to something they are familiar with. Try using some examples perhaps. Obviously, you have a message to proclaim. So I hope you'll keep writing.

Also, I was a little distracted by so many bracketed explanations/definitions within the sentences. I think one or two would have been better.

I hope to read more entries from you. Keep submitting!