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01/24/14
I enjoyed reading your commentary on hope. Thanks for sharing it!
01/25/14
Great devotional with a strong message. I loved the ending, about not having fear. There is no fear in love; but perfect love casteth out fear: because fear hath torment. He that feareth is not made perfect in love. (1 John 4:19 KJV)

Beautiful! Thank you.

God bless~
01/25/14
I guess the Holy Spirit wanted me to include 1 John 4:19 KJV too!

That passage about perfect love is actually, (1 Jouhn 4:18 KJV)

The power of the Spirit, phenomenal!

God bless~
01/25/14
(1 John 4:18 KJV)

God Bless~

01/28/14
Your entry reads like a well studied exposition on hope. And you related it to the hope we have in God. Your message is good.

For a critique, I'd offer the following. This piece could benefit by beginning with an illustrative story with descriptive language to show the points you are headed towards. Entertain our minds while instructing. Don't make it feel like you are instructing us. It's tough to do, I know.

You have a good talent here and I hope you'll keep growing with the rest of us.

Blessings!