The Official Writing Challenge
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Thoughtful message. One thing, I would always capitalize Savior. It is so neat to know that "we love Him because He first loved us."
I love your retelling of the familiar Biblical did it in a creative and interesting way, and you concluded strongly.

Nicely done.

God bless~
This is a glorious story and such an awesome way of using the topic making ends meet.

Great job!
I loved the celebration of Jesus' return to heaven. Your story made me think of how the thief who accepted Jesus still died, even though He did acknowledge Christ. Sometimes we expect a change in our immediate circumstances, when they are a part of God plan. And we should trust Him through every circumstance He allows.

You piece delivered a good message to my heart. So it is a great story. Keep writing.

God bless~