The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job describing the main character. (Although it appeared to me her husband was with her at the first.)

The long descriptive paragraphs may have been divided. Sometimes even short single sentence paragraphs can have impact.

Your ending was perfect and needed nothing else.
A good read, well written and great ending. Shorter paragraph do have more impact, but your story is awesome. Keep writing!
Nice story. A sensitive heart geared towards filling the needs of others receives strength towards its own healing.

I like the way you turned things around at the ending and put the MC on the receiving end. Keep writing!
What a gracious, grace filled beautiful piece. . .

Please "throw a brick" for others to enjoy, comment and support your writing:

Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
Excellent! Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Love & Hugs in, through and because of Jesus, the Christ,

Judi Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
Happy Holydays, beware the holly daze . . .