The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/13
Loved it! Beautifully done.

God bless~
This is beautiful. I like the idea of having it in a prayer format. It's a great way to showcase the topic while praising God. The only thing I noticed is you switched tenses a few times. I know that can be hard not to do in poetry. Your words will touch the heart of your reader. Good job.