The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the animal's take on the birth of Christ. Keep on writing you're doing great.
A nice take on this time of year using a Bible story which features the presence of animals.

When you "double space" between paragraphs, it makes this type of reading easier.

A nice story.

It would be interest to know what Bible story would be used if the theme had been given in the summer time.

Again good work with all the animals doing most of the talking.

I liked their conversation.
You've crafted a sweet loving story with interesting dialogue amongst the animals, while reflecting on our Savior's birth, which of course is the "star" of the story.

Very well done. I could see this as a children's story. Nicely done.

God Bless ~