The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/13
I really like the theme here, and the rhymes are so creative! My favorite: "His Resurrection has robustly resolved all doubts and disillusion." You have a great message here, and I like the way you took two amazing people and related their experience to yours. Awesome job.
11/14/13
Nice job! Very well done in content and delivery, and I truly enjoyed the story.

God bless~
11/16/13
You did a awesome job on this piece.

Keep writing.
11/16/13
A beautiful rendition. Good transitions, the piece flowed nicely and is on topic.
11/16/13
I really enjoyed this piece. The cadence felt light and wispy, yet unveiled precious thoughts.
Our children certainly watch us and see everything we do, even the things we hope they didn't notice at times. That was a walk down memory lane for me, as my two are all grown up. Good job on this one. Keep up the good work.
11/20/13
Love this piece! Great comparisons/contrasts. Keep writing!