The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/13
Good message! Excellent fuel for thought. Nicely done.

God bless~
10/21/13
Interesting thoughts. We all have our own temptations. Satan knew Eve's weakness, and he would have known ours too.
Keep writing.
I enjoyed this. You did a nice job of taking a slightly different twist on the many Adam and Eve stories this week. It made me smile and think, both good things. Make sure you have start quotes at the beginning of a paragraph if the same person is speaking so the reader knows who is speaking. You did a good job of covering the topic with a different twist. I enjoyed the dialog and have had similar ones in my head. Nice job
10/24/13
Congratulations! God bless~
Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level and 21 overall! (the highest rankings can be found on the message board)