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Yea, we have to be careful concerning curiosity. It might be taking you to darkness or light.

Good job!
Great piece. I didn't realise Jonah made the initial covering and curiosity made go to your reference. Sure enough Jonah made the first and God made a covering over that. I really enjoyed the little dissertation.
10/21/13
Nicely said, nicely written, and nicely on topic.

Good job with the familiar Bible story, and important message that it conveyed.

God bless~
This is a nice devotion. I like your opposite take on the topic. God did make us curious. Sometimes it can glorify his name and sometimes it can get us in trouble.

I am not sure the first paragraph worked for you . I felt a tad disappointed when you didn't mention more about Mars. I think you could have skipped it to smooth out the transition or perhaps come full circle and mention it again in the end.

I did enjoy the examples you gave from the Bible. It made me stop and reflect on my own life. This is a nice devotion, a prayer at the end would be the icing on the cake for me. So many people don't know how to pray, and I have a feeling that you would be quite good at showing them. Nice job.
10/24/13
Congratulations! God bless~