The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this article. the story stayed on task, There was interest created, comparisons made, and victories shared in the end.
It was edited for spelling and well written. if I had a vote you got it.
Very believable story. It may have really happened at some time in some way.

The transition to the Bible lesson is a little rough. This may be due to word count.

Proverbs has teaching on how to treat animals. These could also be used as well as Jesus' teaching about rescuing a lost sheep.

Nice story.
10/21/13
I enjoyed your story and I liked the segue into the Biblical reference and wrap up. It had a beginning, middle and good close.

You were on topic and held my attention. Nicely done.

God bless~
I really enjoyed this. You drew me in immediately and kept my attention throughout. The immediate conflict was the perfect suspense builder. I also like how you brought the Bible message into the story. You did a nice job.
10/23/13
I enjoyed the way you brought us into the cat's world. You downplay his significance and then you showed us that someone recognized his importance.

Though it seems it might not have been curious that almost killed this cat but hunger! You can consider making the paragraphs smaller to bring home your points and make reading easier.

I enjoyed your presentation. You connected the story of the cat with a story from the Bible and ended with a positive message.

10/24/13
Congratulations! God bless~