The Official Writing Challenge
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I love any entry that has Biblical accounts, especially about our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ.

This was well written and looped into the topic at hand with ease.

Nicely done.

God bless~
The application of the last paragraph is good for us all to remember because John and also Paul tells us that we all sin. We need to listen to the one who would love us enough to tell us when we do.

Good application to a Bible story.

It seemed the story flowed smoothly.
Congrats! God bless~
Nice piece....the thought-provoking questions at the end was a nice touch too.