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Interesting story to illustrate a point.

Many may say they don't believe in God because "they don't want to believe in God. If they believed in God, what changes would then need to make.
That was a lot of story to fit into 750 words and you did a very good job with the limitation you had. I would love to read it expanded into a bigger version with no limit. You brought it to a great ending with a very insightful point. Very enjoyable reading.
NIce piece of writing. I really got into this story and enjoyed it fully.

Thank you.

God bless~
You did a nice job with this story. It feels authentic and has touches of humor sprinkled throughout. I think you did a fine job of nailing the topic too.