The Official Writing Challenge
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Masterfully and beautifully written. Incredible that you are at the Beginner Level. Your vivid descriptions keep me reading past the story line itself. I am honored to be the first to comment - you have a wondrous gift for storytelling. Never stop writing!
08/10/13
Brilliant piece replete with a myriad of emotions. I love your descriptions, and I like how you interfaced the "world of today" and their beliefs, with the "world of yesteryear"--so much has changed, and yet, GOD is unchanging, as is HIS WORD, and you brought that forward in expert fashion.

Loved this! And, especially this line: "Huge, hard-bound books with crackling pages and dust covers that have been worked like rented mules" Can I borrow that? LOL.

Thanks for this...You need to write BOOKS my dear.

God bless~
08/11/13
What a powerful truth you've so skilfully woven your story around. I agree totally with the above two comments. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Well done!
08/15/13
CONGRATS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN! MOVEN' ON UP NOW. Very well deserved.
08/15/13
Congrats! God bless~
08/15/13
Congrats from me too. Now for level 2.
08/15/13
Thank you all, I appreciate you taking the time to stop by the entry.

And Danielle, I enjoyed your Canny Tale, the twist was wonderful.
Congratulations on placing 1 in your level and 14 overall!! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
You write so wonderfully well!

Congratulations! God bless you. KJV Heb 10:26-31
KJV Rev 14:12
What an amazing and fantastic picture you paint of this wonderful old lady - I grew to love her more and more as the story went on! Wonderful writing - your descriptions, your injections of humour, the reality of Michelle, her mother and her grandmother all speak straight to the heart. Many congratulations on her well deserved placing.
08/22/13
Beautifully written. You drew me right in to the scenario and your character representations were perfect. You are a gifted writer. Congratulations on your level win!