The Official Writing Challenge
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There are some excellent ideas in this, and I like the contrast between the two characters. However, I would also have liked to see them more fleshed out and given the space you did have to go into more detail about the family and the father. (I think that is who Raquel is praying for). Lots of promise in this; so keep writing! God bless.