The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice job starting in the Old Testament and bringing us into the New Testament.

Yes, when we are baptized for the forgiveness of our sins, we receive the Holy spirit and become a child of God.

Interesting way to include all people by using the name you used for people.
The thought of grace was a big expansion of the "earthlings'" way of thinking.
This is a bit choppy for prose and yet not quite a poem. If you intend for it to be a story or devotional, I suggest you make full paragraphs and include a specific story to illustrate your thoughts.
Good thoughts - keep writing!