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This is a great testimony. You take the reader on a journey back in time with you.

Just a couple of tiny red ink. When comparing more than two you would say the easiest of the rest of my siblings. If it was just one sibling, you would use easier. The other thing is there are two words that sound the same but are spelled differently. Foreword is what comes first in a book. The one I think you meant is forward.

You did a great job of writing on topic. You have a good message too. All parents have expectations and you showed If a child does get off track, it's possible today overcome difficulties. This is a great article.
Very open story. Easily read because of the short paragraphs.

Memory serves as a deep well of information but coupled with jornaling concrete facts rise to the surface.

This will encourage others.
07/20/13
Great testimony! Most of us do end up in places we never expected to when we started following Jesus. This is very encouraging. If you could add a little more "showing" versus "telling" this would become a little more dynamic and perhaps draw the reader in a little better. Otherwise, very well done. Keep it up!
07/23/13
Fantastic testimony and a moving and powerful entry. I'd like to thank you for shaing this story, I am going to forward this to a friend of mine that it will most certainly minister to.

God bless~
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