The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fascinating story. You do a nice job of delving deep into the MC's heart and revealing things that many may not fully understand about themselves. You may want to shorten some of your sentences. In a piece this short, long sentences can overwhelm the reader. I did enjoy your message and think it will inspire many to look inward and hear that hum for themselves. You definitely nailed the topic. Nice job.
I was a bit confused at the change of scenes.
I agree that all we do should bring honor to the Lord.