The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/13
Oh my heart lurched with this one! Great story...so glad it turned out okay, my heart couldn't have taken it otherwise.

God Bless~
06/01/13
I enjoyed this. Loved the imagery! I was also glad for the happy ending!
Wow this is a powerful story. I could feel my heart thudding. Though the ending was slightly predictable, you did a superb job of building the suspense. I really enjoyed every word.
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