The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/13
Good thoughts, good analogies, and good story overall. Perfect will, HIS not ours! Yes, Amen and Amen.

God bless~
This is a great devotion. You did a nice job of starting off with a real life experience that every one can relate to. The only red ink I have is tiny. Okay should be spelled out or both letters capitalized --OK. Your transition to the main message was quite smooth. I especially liked the line that God always gives us a way out. It's a powerful line. Nice job.