The Official Writing Challenge
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On the bright side you have the knack for telling a story. Please learn how to write dialog - with quote marks and spacing. Secondly, understand that characters have action and avoid showing rather than telling. And finally, find a challenge friend who will proof read your work. I know you are a beginner and that means you have the tail of the tiger. Keep writing and grow with Faithwriters.
I enjoyed this engaging and charming story. Nice dialogue between mom and daughter, perfect for Mother's Day coming up. It was a special treat to read, thanks for sharing.

God bless~