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You don't date the article but I would guess it poised in the 1800's. A good story, with some pretty good descriptions
The internal emotions of Edith were well developed. Could make into a longer story. Thanks for sharing.
This was a really good story with multi-layered textures throughout. It moved along nicely and had an excellent conclusion. Great job!

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More! More! I love this . . .
I really enjoy the sweet story and characters that you painted for me. I could truly empathy for the MC. The only red ink I have is to make sure you don't give away the ending with your title. I think you did a brilliant job of weaving the topic throughout your whole story. This is a delightful read.
Congratulations on ranking 4 in your level and 19 overall!