The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/05
It took a couple of reads to get this one right. You have a creative thought working and with some editting it could go a long way. Work on dialogue stucture and organization. Also, note that an elipsis is three ... at the end of a sentence a fourth may be added - no more than that. Keep writing, there is a spark here.