The Official Writing Challenge
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Matched couplets are always fun, watch the rhythm and measure. Keep writing, I enjoyed this.
Wow - this was a very moving and intimate piece, filled with reflections that are most powerful.

Excellent job...I saw a story unfold before my eyes as I read this. Having worked in a nursing home for years, I was quite accustomed to the patients doing "life reviews" as they aged in place. This reminded me of touched my heart, and brought a tear to my eye.

Phenomenal! God bless~