The Official Writing Challenge
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I considered this scripture but didn't write on it. I like the way you emphasized it. Well done.
Good comparison - showing instead of telling. Perhaps a little more plot would have developed it even more. Good job.
Wow, I really liked the way you brought the verse to life. Your story has a deeply poetic feel about it and I thought you did an outstanding job.
You did a very good job on this piece. Congrats on your third place level one win.
Congratulations on placing 3 in your level and 29 overall!