The Official Writing Challenge
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Really quite beautiful and you have done a nice job with it. I like the way that you showed God's passion and desire for his people. There was one line, I give up a lot, that disturbed me a little bit. I could see people mis-read this and believe that God gives up on us. I know that was not your intention though. You did a nice job of covering the topic. This was quite poetic and read like a poem. It definitely gives the reader something to think about. And that is always a good thing. Good job.
I felt that I was reading a Psalm. It makes me think -- is MY heart where it should be? I need to take the time to examine it and make sure that I am open to his love. I want a flood, not a drip. Excellent!