The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/05
This is a wonderful poem, true in both rhyme and meter. The only word that jars a bit is "His" at the end of the first and the last stanza; it's a possessive without a possession. Beautiful picture of praise, skillfully written.
11/09/05
Great descriptive poem of how our worship should be.. or so it was to me.. Thank you. djdeb
A very beautiful entry! Well done!
You've taken your reader straight to the sparkling and melodic gates of Heaven! Beautiful!
11/10/05
Very well done
11/10/05
Nice job.
11/10/05
You are so wrong, thinking you'll be in beginners for the rest of your life. No sirree! This was wonderfully written. Absolutely beautiful!!!
11/10/05
Laurie - this is beautiful! Crafted and beautiful - a great combination. So what was this about forever? :)
11/12/05
I can only echo Linda's comment. A wonderful piece of praise poetry.