The Official Writing Challenge
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This sounds like a day out of my life. I am glad God gives us many opportunities throughout the day to rest in Him.
Awww, I loved the part about her pet in the covers! That sounds like my little guy!

Nice job, beautiful message.

God bless~
This is a sweet right to the point story. I would have enjoyed reading more about your MC and her dog. That's a good thing when a reader wants to read more. I did notice you switched tense from psst to present and back again. I enjoyed the intersection with the dog as it gives the reader some input about the MC's personalities. Keep writing!
Cute. Easy to identify with. Fun and light. I have a cat that rides on my shoulder when I cook. Animals seem to be such a nice addition to any story.