The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem. You got right to the point. I could so relate to the MC. The only red ink I have would be to add an apostrophe in God's love. Your message is one that many people can relate to. It felt like you were speaking right from my own heart. You did a lovely job.
This message, in your poem, is so real to the lives of us sinners. Thank you for reminding us of a wonderful God and Saviour.

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Colin (Gold Membership)
Beautiful. God bless~
I enjoyed this. Good thoughts effectively presented.