The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute story. Helen's manners were definitely atrocious and I'm sure irritating as well. The ending was really funny and made me chuckle.
I enjoyed your story. The style reminds me of the traditional moral fables. Your ending was very clever. :)
Your portrayal of Helen, really made her not likeable. I was glad that at the end, someone really told her what they thought of her behavior.

Thanks for sharing!